Comic Revision

To revise the comic I first redid the borders around each image, making them thinner to not draw attention away from the stick figure. I also redid the wall lines to make them match the border. I also added a few frames to make it more clear what is happening when the hand is pushing the stick figure off of the cliff. Finally, I added more sequencing to the stick figure falling and repositioned him.

Here is the original comic and below is the new one I revised.



Revised comic:




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